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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 6:13pm

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Hey Matt,

Since you read my feature I think it's only fair to give others a shot. However if you have trouble filling your five slots (I don't see why you would though) and you can squeeze in my short "New Year's Eve", that would be great.

Again, I'll take a back seat and see if others need a read first.

AJR

Click HERE to read JOHN LENNON'S HEAVEN https://preview.tinyurl.com/John-Lennon-s-Heaven-110-pgs/

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 6:15pm

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Quoted from ajr

Hey Matt,

Since you read my feature I think it's only fair to give others a shot. However if you have trouble filling your five slots (I don't see why you would though) and you can squeeze in my short "New Year's Eve", that would be great.

Again, I'll take a back seat and see if others need a read first.

AJR

Ideally, I'd really like to give people a read who haven't had one yet.But if there's not a lot of takers, I'd be happy to throw yours on the pile.SimplyScripts - Discussion Board - Discuss Screenwriting, Movie Scripts and Screenplays (15)

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 6:20pm

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My thoughts exactly -

Click HERE to read JOHN LENNON'S HEAVEN https://preview.tinyurl.com/John-Lennon-s-Heaven-110-pgs/

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 6:21pm

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If you can be bothered, you could look at my short Punch and Judy.

You'll probably have to search for it, it's a bit old.

Specifically, I want to cut it down to about 12 pages maximum for Production. Any thoughts on those lines would be welcome, amongst the usual.

Cheers,

Rick

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 6:23pm

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Quoted from Scar Tissue Films

If you can be bothered, you could look at my short Punch and Judy.

You'll probably have to search for it, it's a bit old.

Specifically, I want to cut it down to about 12 pages maximum for Production. Any thoughts on those lines would be welcome, amongst the usual.

Ooo, this one comes with a challenge.Awesome.

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 6:28pm

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I think what you're doing is very nice. I would take you up on it, but I know you don't like horror so I imagine you hate slashers. Just letting you know why I haven't asked for a read.SimplyScripts - Discussion Board - Discuss Screenwriting, Movie Scripts and Screenplays (45)

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 6:31pm

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Quoted from Grandma Bear

I think what you're doing is very nice. I would take you up on it, but I know you don't like horror so I imagine you hate slashers. Just letting you know why I haven't asked for a read.SimplyScripts - Discussion Board - Discuss Screenwriting, Movie Scripts and Screenplays (49)

I'm not the biggest fan of horror, but every once in awhile something jumps out and surprises me.I swear I enjoyed the last script I read of yours though.

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Hey Dressel,

Please feel free to take your pick from one of the titles in my signature if you have time."One Last Story" kind of died a quick death.

Thanks,
Craig

The Myth of the Cuban Missile (8 Pages)
The Loss of Fear (12 Pages)
The Final Pawn (18 Pages)

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 7:22pm

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Quoted from Scar Tissue Films

If you can be bothered, you could look at my short Punch and Judy.

Curious about this one, I tracked it down for you, Matt:

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1229216291

I will try to have a look myself before too long.

Hey, it's my tiny, little IMDb!

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dresseme
Posted: February 11th, 2010, 7:58pm

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Quoted from Craiger6

Please feel free to take your pick from one of the titles in my signature if you have time."One Last Story" kind of died a quick death.

"One Last Story" it is!

Quoted from bert

Curious about this one, I tracked it down for you, Matt:

http://www.simplyscripts.net/cgi-bin/Blah/Blah.pl?b-short/m-1229216291

I will try to have a look myself before too long.

Thanks Bert.This one definitely does look interesting.

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Posted: February 11th, 2010, 9:19pm

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If ya want to give my most recent script "Would You Like Fries With That?" it would be greatly appreciated!
Links in my signature!

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Posted: February 12th, 2010, 2:08am

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I think I kinda missed the boat on seeing this thread by a bit, but my revised version of Hard Case is up and in desperate need of viscious critiquing.Not sure your opinion of Action/Thriller.Its on the short side of feature, 60 pages.

Since your not looking for me to return the favor I'll just put it out that I'll pay it forward, you check it out, I'll check out any script someone wants a read on.

Mine:
HARD CASE
(65 Pages) Stealing the case is just the beginning...

APU
(80 pages) A city where superheroes are murderers and villains walk through walls...

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dresseme
Posted: February 12th, 2010, 12:23pm

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Quoted from kev

If ya want to give my most recent script "Would You Like Fries With That?" it would be greatly appreciated!
Links in my signature!

Quoted from jackx

I think I kinda missed the boat on seeing this thread by a bit, but my revised version of Hard Case is up and in desperate need of viscious critiquing.Not sure your opinion of Action/Thriller.Its on the short side of feature, 60 pages.

Since your not looking for me to return the favor I'll just put it out that I'll pay it forward, you check it out, I'll check out any script someone wants a read on.

Ok, looks like I've got #4 and #5.

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if you like scifi I would love your opinion on my script H.S.P.

use the link in my sig it is the newer draft.

H.S.PSci Fi, Fantasy - When a splinter group instigates a desperate plot to prevent the extinction of their species at the expense of human life, a jaded Doctor and an FBI double agent is caught in a struggle between their own people and their humanity. 119

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dresseme
Posted: February 22nd, 2010, 7:40pm

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On to Round #4: The Super Special Shorts-Only Edition!

Anyone who wants their short critiqued, I'll take the first five.

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